Teacher feedback

This blog is good - make sure however that you add in explanation under each shot in your storyboard 0 it is clear to a moderator that there are not details under each shot in the picture - this does not look good - make up for this by adding in detail on your blog under each image to describe what is happening as it needs to be very clear. One analysis on your blog is not enough either and you should each do one from home - one that relates to your own idea. Also you must explain why you have put you as work on here - it looks very out of place - I thought one was to test the camera quality - if this is right - explain it, otherwise it looks strange.