Response to feedback

We believe all the feedback that we received was valid and useful.
We understand that it needs more footage and we are in the process of filming more but we did have some issues with the camera when were out filming initially so we didn't manage to film anywhere near as much footage as we wanted to. Also we don't believe that a performance element is necessary too our film as the while point of the video is that it is a narrative video as apposed to a performance style video. Also we can understand it being a little boring at points at the moment as to make a rough cut out of the amount we managed to film we had to manage with what we had and unfortunately parts may seem a little boring but they will be attained to when we have filmed the rest of our footage. again when we can film more we will sort the car crash scene out as that is actually going to be the end scene and not in the middle.
Thanks for all your feedback it shall be taken into consideration when we are able to edit more!