Feedback From Other Groups

Positive feedback

-Generally very good, we successfully managed to make the video feel depressing and moody.

-The variation of shots was very good, we managed to make each individual shot clear, but we also managed to prevent the audience from being bored.

-continuity is another strength of our video. We managed to make each shot connect to the next without the main character appearing to move back in time, or forwards.

Constructive criticism

-We would need to include a bit more variation in the events that happen, perhaps make them a little faster or different to each other.

-We could also use a stronger ending, make it more conclusive through use of sound, or finish on a part of the song that would make the video end better.